Blue Mountains 8 (haiku)

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ken.brandli
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Blue Mountains 8 (haiku)

Postby ken.brandli » Sun Feb 15, 2015 8:08 pm

Image

in an ancient land
among the cliffs and canyons
the echoes linger


© K R Brandli 11/21/2014

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Re: Blue Mountains 8 (haiku)

Postby Stella » Sun Feb 15, 2015 10:40 pm

Oh yes Ken, and those echoes can be haunting..a lot of wonderful natural imagery in this delightful haiku..

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Re: Blue Mountains 8 (haiku)

Postby Sandra Martyres » Mon Feb 16, 2015 12:49 am

Your haiku poems are astounding..

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Re: Blue Mountains 8 (haiku)

Postby denysruak » Mon Feb 16, 2015 3:44 am

Your masterful stroke is evident again.

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Re: Blue Mountains 8 (haiku)

Postby ken.brandli » Mon Feb 16, 2015 10:34 am

Thanks for the kind comments. glad you enjoyed this piece.

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Re: Blue Mountains 8 (haiku)

Postby Cindy » Mon Feb 16, 2015 10:35 pm

This is a beautiful haiku.

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ken.brandli
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Re: Blue Mountains 8 (haiku)

Postby ken.brandli » Tue Feb 17, 2015 8:38 am

Thank you Cindy.

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Re: Blue Mountains 8 (haiku)

Postby Joseph Anderson » Wed Feb 18, 2015 8:34 pm

Ken-the images you created in this excellant haiku will linger longer then those echoes in that canyon.I would like to write in this form, but
cant seem to concentrate it to your great brevity-brilliant

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Re: Blue Mountains 8 (haiku)

Postby Tom Balch » Wed Feb 18, 2015 11:08 pm

Voices from the past sing loud in this great Haiku, Ken.


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