Loneliness

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apoetwholovestosing
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Loneliness

Postby apoetwholovestosing » Mon Feb 16, 2015 4:46 am

Dressed in red
The SOS of heartache
Red, in defiance or perhaps
A reminder of the fire
Now removed from your eyes...
I've no place to hide,
Loneliness
Invades all the empty spaces
Left when you said that last good-bye.
Oh death!...Why?

Dorothy Alves Holmes
A Poet Who Loves To Sing

written 7:26-7:27 p.m.
December 5, 2011
JOTTOMH

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Sandra Martyres
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Re: Loneliness

Postby Sandra Martyres » Mon Feb 16, 2015 8:30 am

A sad write Dorothy... Losing a loved one is truly painful and difficult to accept...take care

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Stella
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Re: Loneliness

Postby Stella » Mon Feb 16, 2015 1:30 pm

So sad Dorothy, but "Why" must be the most asked question..

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Cindy
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Re: Loneliness

Postby Cindy » Mon Feb 16, 2015 10:41 pm

This is heartbreaking and beautifully written.

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eleanor prince
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Re: Loneliness

Postby eleanor prince » Sat Feb 21, 2015 2:45 am

Yes, how true - 'loneliness invades all the empty spaces' - sad and beautiful poem


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