Morning Noon and Night

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Tom Balch
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Morning Noon and Night

Postby Tom Balch » Wed Feb 18, 2015 11:03 pm

The dawn chorus sings
sun peeks over horizon
winter morn begins.

Salmon coloured clouds
drift across robin egg skies
snow is on the way.

Snow falling gently
against a dark night backdrop
winter wonderland.

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Cindy
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Re: Morning Noon and Night

Postby Cindy » Thu Feb 19, 2015 1:14 am

Very beautiful. I try not to admit in any way shape or form that snow or winter can be beautiful these days, but gladly gave it a rest just for your poem. Definately beautiful. :-)

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Karin Anderson
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Re: Morning Noon and Night

Postby Karin Anderson » Thu Feb 19, 2015 12:23 pm

Picturesque haiku and I particularly love the second one as "salmon coloured clouds drift across robin egg skies" really did it for me. Your imagery is superb throughout this sequence of haiku thank you Tom.

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Seema Chowdhury
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Re: Morning Noon and Night

Postby Seema Chowdhury » Thu Feb 19, 2015 5:46 pm

Very pictourious, enjoyed it

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Re: Morning Noon and Night

Postby Stella » Fri Feb 20, 2015 7:38 pm

A wonderful string of haiku Tom, lovely imagery in each one from sunrise to sunset... i especially like the middle one :)


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