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Behind The Cloud
Posted: Thu Feb 19, 2015 8:04 pm
by Tom Balch
If you could look through rose tinted glasses
I´m sure that you would grow in your own mind
and be the one we know that you could be.
The one who shines the one who smiles the one
who lives life to the full, the one that we
aspire to be, a bright light in the dark.
So please keep on striving always wanting
to break away from those chains that bind you
and leave behind the cloud that caused the pain.
Re: Behind The Cloud
Posted: Fri Feb 20, 2015 4:05 am
by Cindy
This is so inspiring. I love the last line.
Re: Behind The Cloud
Posted: Fri Feb 20, 2015 6:17 am
by eleanor prince
I find your poem uplifting - great maxim to live by
Re: Behind The Cloud
Posted: Fri Feb 20, 2015 3:28 pm
by Stella
Just a little love and confidence can be so encouraging Tom to break free from this pain and to be yourself,the person inside you that wants to shine..
A lot of insight here as to what is like to be stifled by dark ,heavy clouds Tom, it takes a lot of inner strength to get up and fight.
Re: Behind The Cloud
Posted: Fri Feb 20, 2015 5:31 pm
by Sandra Martyres
A piece of wisdom shared in this inspiring write.. Beautifully expressed Tom!
Re: Behind The Cloud
Posted: Mon Mar 02, 2015 4:30 pm
by Joseph Anderson
Sage, sound advice and true We are what we make ourselves to be An inspiring ,uplifting thought to hang our hats on
Re: Behind The Cloud
Posted: Tue Mar 03, 2015 3:05 pm
by Seema Chowdhury
Nice advice,
Re: Behind The Cloud
Posted: Wed Jun 03, 2015 10:33 am
by eleanor prince
I feel transported by both the pace and content of your inspiring gem
Re: Behind The Cloud
Posted: Thu Jun 04, 2015 6:09 am
by Fay Slimm
I love this one Tom - - most encouraging and written with tender compassion.
Re: Behind The Cloud
Posted: Thu Jun 04, 2015 9:32 pm
by Nightmute
A beautiful plea given out of love, Tom. We tend to hold onto our pain and anguish far longer than we should, and by doing so, we limit ourselves.
Re: Behind The Cloud
Posted: Tue Jun 16, 2015 12:54 am
by SyberRose
A gratifying piece...nicely penned Tom...we all have that twin inside of us aching to be introduced...Rose
Re: Behind The Cloud
Posted: Tue Jun 16, 2015 6:58 pm
by stevenstirk
Powerful and inspiring, yet done in so few words.
Methinks you have an endless source of inspiration.