Behind The Cloud

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Tom Balch
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Behind The Cloud

Postby Tom Balch » Thu Feb 19, 2015 8:04 pm


If you could look through rose tinted glasses
I´m sure that you would grow in your own mind
and be the one we know that you could be.

The one who shines the one who smiles the one
who lives life to the full, the one that we
aspire to be, a bright light in the dark.

So please keep on striving always wanting
to break away from those chains that bind you
and leave behind the cloud that caused the pain.
Last edited by Tom Balch on Tue Jun 16, 2015 5:27 am, edited 1 time in total.

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Cindy
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Re: Behind The Cloud

Postby Cindy » Fri Feb 20, 2015 4:05 am

This is so inspiring. I love the last line. :-)

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Re: Behind The Cloud

Postby eleanor prince » Fri Feb 20, 2015 6:17 am

I find your poem uplifting - great maxim to live by :)

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Re: Behind The Cloud

Postby Stella » Fri Feb 20, 2015 3:28 pm

Just a little love and confidence can be so encouraging Tom to break free from this pain and to be yourself,the person inside you that wants to shine..

A lot of insight here as to what is like to be stifled by dark ,heavy clouds Tom, it takes a lot of inner strength to get up and fight.

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Re: Behind The Cloud

Postby Sandra Martyres » Fri Feb 20, 2015 5:31 pm

A piece of wisdom shared in this inspiring write.. Beautifully expressed Tom!

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Re: Behind The Cloud

Postby Joseph Anderson » Mon Mar 02, 2015 4:30 pm

Sage, sound advice and true We are what we make ourselves to be An inspiring ,uplifting thought to hang our hats on

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Re: Behind The Cloud

Postby Seema Chowdhury » Tue Mar 03, 2015 3:05 pm

Nice advice,

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Re: Behind The Cloud

Postby eleanor prince » Wed Jun 03, 2015 10:33 am

I feel transported by both the pace and content of your inspiring gem

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Re: Behind The Cloud

Postby Fay Slimm » Thu Jun 04, 2015 6:09 am

I love this one Tom - - most encouraging and written with tender compassion.

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Re: Behind The Cloud

Postby Nightmute » Thu Jun 04, 2015 9:32 pm

A beautiful plea given out of love, Tom. We tend to hold onto our pain and anguish far longer than we should, and by doing so, we limit ourselves.

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Re: Behind The Cloud

Postby SyberRose » Tue Jun 16, 2015 12:54 am

A gratifying piece...nicely penned Tom...we all have that twin inside of us aching to be introduced...Rose
“You must stay drunk on writing so reality cannot destroy you.”
― Ray Bradbury,

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Re: Behind The Cloud

Postby stevenstirk » Tue Jun 16, 2015 6:58 pm

Powerful and inspiring, yet done in so few words.
Methinks you have an endless source of inspiration.


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