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Tom Balch
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Postby Tom Balch » Mon Feb 23, 2015 5:11 pm

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Sandra Martyres
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Re: Leave It

Postby Sandra Martyres » Mon Feb 23, 2015 5:51 pm

The closing lines sum up the poem beautifully there is nothing to be gained by living in the past. Great poem Tom!

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Re: Leave It

Postby Joseph Anderson » Mon Feb 23, 2015 6:36 pm

Tom- just look ahead and get on down the road.A truly,truthful write. Brief, direct and right on target..Good, very good

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Re: Leave It

Postby Karin Anderson » Tue Feb 24, 2015 12:53 am

Great advice from a great poet, and the image of the dead horse is striking imagery from this crisp and unforgettable read Tom.

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Re: Leave It

Postby Cindy » Tue Feb 24, 2015 11:26 pm

Yes, very definately great advice and I like the way you put it.

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Re: Leave It

Postby Fay Slimm » Wed Feb 25, 2015 9:43 am

Tom this poetic advice should be posted on every notice board - - a great write and thanks for the needed reminders.

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Re: Leave It

Postby Stella » Sat Feb 28, 2015 6:21 pm

good advice Tom, walk away from it or it will sap your energy..


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