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Stella
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Fantasy

Postby Stella » Sun Mar 01, 2015 10:55 pm

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Fantasy

If you were the lovely moon
that I admire from afar
I could come and sit beside you
and be your favourite star

I would shine like a diamond
a beacon to your glow,
we could light up the heavens
wherever we would go

You could rock me in your cradle
and soft lull me to sleep
ask the angels to protect us
and pray our souls to keep

When the dawn of morning came
we could disappear from view,
find another world to light
from the love between us two

The night skies would adore us
for being the friends we are
if you were the lovely moon
and I your favourite star


© Stella Armour 2012-08-11

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Sandra Martyres
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Re: Fantasy

Postby Sandra Martyres » Sun Mar 01, 2015 11:18 pm

Fantasy at its poetic best...loved this sweet poem Stella.. Good to see you posting again. I hope you are feeling better and well on the way to a complete recovery. Love Sandra

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Re: Fantasy

Postby Fay Slimm » Mon Mar 02, 2015 12:27 am

Welcome back to posting again dear Stella and best wishes for a complete recovery from the surgery on your hand - - the fantasy poem is simply delightful.

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Re: Fantasy

Postby Karin Anderson » Mon Mar 02, 2015 10:34 am

A glorious romantic fantasy and as your name Stella is a star you do shine like a diamond and complement the moon beautifully. It is a lovely surprise to find you posting again Stella and I hope each day your hand improves more and more....

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Re: Fantasy

Postby Cindy » Mon Mar 02, 2015 12:25 pm

Oh, I love this. It's written so beautifully. I enjoyed the rhythm of it too.

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Re: Fantasy

Postby Joseph Anderson » Mon Mar 02, 2015 3:38 pm

Thanh you Stella for this beautiful,ethereal piece of poetry.Great thought, presentation and wonderful rhyme, which I adore. This is as heaven sent-
love it

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Re: Fantasy

Postby Seema Chowdhury » Tue Mar 03, 2015 3:12 pm

Wow, it's beautiful Stella, really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.

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Re: Fantasy

Postby Nightmute » Tue Mar 03, 2015 7:38 pm

Friendship and love definitely found within this softly exquisite verse, Stella. How lovely it is to think on being away from the world while being accompanied by a loved one, Ma'am.


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