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Re: Old Man I

Posted: Sat Mar 07, 2015 2:10 pm
by Cindy
I love the images here and I love the line, "suspended in space by old bones." A perfect description since our bodies age, but our essence feels so much the same as always. Beautiful poem. (To edit, there is a little pencil Icon with two others in the upper right to the left of your name on the page with your poem. Just click on that. Then you can edit.) :-) Maybe you've found that out by the time you've read this, but just in case....

Re: Old Man I

Posted: Sat Mar 07, 2015 7:06 pm
by Seema Chowdhury
An engaging write, nicely composed