Old Man I

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Cindy
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Re: Old Man I

Postby Cindy » Sat Mar 07, 2015 2:10 pm

I love the images here and I love the line, "suspended in space by old bones." A perfect description since our bodies age, but our essence feels so much the same as always. Beautiful poem. (To edit, there is a little pencil Icon with two others in the upper right to the left of your name on the page with your poem. Just click on that. Then you can edit.) :-) Maybe you've found that out by the time you've read this, but just in case....

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Seema Chowdhury
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Re: Old Man I

Postby Seema Chowdhury » Sat Mar 07, 2015 7:06 pm

An engaging write, nicely composed


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