SUN...haiku

[Stella]

#1
orange sun melted
silk golden sheets spread themselves
over ocean beds

#2
late red setting sun
slow melts over the ocean
scarlet shadows bleed

#3
red flames of sunset
absorbed into twilight tide
crimson waves kiss shore

#4
sun blazes its fire
thunder rages in red sky
cool raindrops refresh



© Stella Armour 2010

[Fay Slimm]

Wonderfully powerful these haiku-tributes to the glorious sun Stella. Thanks too for the stunning picture.

[Karin Anderson]

Such a marvelous suite of haiku where each haiku could stand alone Stella I agree with Fay, as together they are powerful and my favorite is the concluding one with the comparison of fire and thunder to the cool raindrops.

[Tom Balch]

A wonderful Haiku sequence, Stella and what a lovely picture to go with your words.

[ken.brandli]

Always love your colourful works, Stella. They bring a sense of vision that is rare indeed.

[Seema Chowdhury]

Wow, superb!!!

[Cindy]

Love your haiku's. Beautiful words and picture.