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Irritable Vowel Syndrome
Posted: Wed Mar 11, 2015 3:55 pm
by stevenstirk
To use a vewel withon a werd
Goves pleesure to the wroter
A wrotten vewel when priperly shered
Can moke tha sporit loghter
I nover wis mach geed at ot
Bat werking on each lotter
I'll keap en tryeng for a bot
Ta moke my paems botter
Re: Irritable Vowel Syndrome
Posted: Wed Mar 11, 2015 7:08 pm
by Stella
Haha..it is so good to see you here again Steven with your wonderful written humour...grait fuan
Re: Irritable Vowel Syndrome
Posted: Wed Mar 11, 2015 7:32 pm
by denysruak
Moy yoo koop on wrotong yoor orrotoblo yowol syndromo pooms - jost for fon! Thonks for shorong.
Re: Irritable Vowel Syndrome
Posted: Wed Mar 11, 2015 7:48 pm
by Joseph Anderson
LOL-what a great title.I laughed so hard that now I have irritable bowels .A wonderful escape from the heavy stuff
Re: Irritable Vowel Syndrome
Posted: Wed Mar 11, 2015 9:16 pm
by ken.brandli
Steven...as I live and breathe! Great to see your work. Loved this piece. You have brought a smile to my face in what has been a very difficult couple of weeks, and I thank you for that.
Re: Irritable Vowel Syndrome
Posted: Wed Mar 11, 2015 9:40 pm
by Cindy
Love this one too. Hilarious.
Re: Irritable Vowel Syndrome
Posted: Thu Mar 12, 2015 12:26 pm
by Tom Balch
Ha-ha! Leve thos a lit, Stivon, rigords tum.
Re: Irritable Vowel Syndrome
Posted: Sun Mar 15, 2015 8:51 am
by Karin Anderson
As Cindy comments this is hilarious and a fantastic play on vowels and I can't stop laughing. Do keep up the mirthful work Steven...
Re: Irritable Vowel Syndrome
Posted: Sun Mar 15, 2015 10:12 pm
by Fay Slimm
You crack me up Steve - - you really do - - great giggles again from the title to the end line.