Irritable Vowel Syndrome

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stevenstirk
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Irritable Vowel Syndrome

Postby stevenstirk » Wed Mar 11, 2015 3:55 pm

To use a vewel withon a werd
Goves pleesure to the wroter
A wrotten vewel when priperly shered
Can moke tha sporit loghter

I nover wis mach geed at ot
Bat werking on each lotter
I'll keap en tryeng for a bot
Ta moke my paems botter

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Stella
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Re: Irritable Vowel Syndrome

Postby Stella » Wed Mar 11, 2015 7:08 pm

:lol: Haha..it is so good to see you here again Steven with your wonderful written humour...grait fuan :lol:

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denysruak
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Re: Irritable Vowel Syndrome

Postby denysruak » Wed Mar 11, 2015 7:32 pm

Moy yoo koop on wrotong yoor orrotoblo yowol syndromo pooms - jost for fon! Thonks for shorong.

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Joseph Anderson
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Re: Irritable Vowel Syndrome

Postby Joseph Anderson » Wed Mar 11, 2015 7:48 pm

LOL-what a great title.I laughed so hard that now I have irritable bowels .A wonderful escape from the heavy stuff

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ken.brandli
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Re: Irritable Vowel Syndrome

Postby ken.brandli » Wed Mar 11, 2015 9:16 pm

Steven...as I live and breathe! Great to see your work. Loved this piece. You have brought a smile to my face in what has been a very difficult couple of weeks, and I thank you for that.

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Cindy
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Re: Irritable Vowel Syndrome

Postby Cindy » Wed Mar 11, 2015 9:40 pm

Love this one too. Hilarious.

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Tom Balch
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Re: Irritable Vowel Syndrome

Postby Tom Balch » Thu Mar 12, 2015 12:26 pm

Ha-ha! Leve thos a lit, Stivon, rigords tum.

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Karin Anderson
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Re: Irritable Vowel Syndrome

Postby Karin Anderson » Sun Mar 15, 2015 8:51 am

As Cindy comments this is hilarious and a fantastic play on vowels and I can't stop laughing. Do keep up the mirthful work Steven...

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Fay Slimm
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Re: Irritable Vowel Syndrome

Postby Fay Slimm » Sun Mar 15, 2015 10:12 pm

You crack me up Steve - - you really do - - great giggles again from the title to the end line.


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