She Walks

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Cindy
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She Walks

Postby Cindy » Fri Mar 13, 2015 4:01 pm

She walks the shadows of the trees
Beneath their leafy canopies
When night is full, sometimes the moon
Her gown aflutter in the breeze

No soul can tell the reason why
She walks beneath the darkened sky
Among the deepest shadows there
Without a whisper or a sigh

She walks in silence, wearing white
With just the stillness of the night
Wrapped in her secrets, like a cloak
Just drifting in and out of sight

No one recalls the maiden's name
Or where it is from which she came
Just that she wanders there, alone
A gown of white, a ghostly flame.

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Stella
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Re: She Walks

Postby Stella » Fri Mar 13, 2015 10:04 pm

Haunting and beautiful Cindy, i like the way you have wrapped her in secrets like a cloak..and how she drifts by

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Karin Anderson
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Re: She Walks

Postby Karin Anderson » Sat Mar 14, 2015 11:20 am

An intriguing read so beautifully written with a magical flow. I have read it over and over and was mystified each time Cindy.

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stevenstirk
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Re: She Walks

Postby stevenstirk » Sat Mar 14, 2015 9:40 pm

I would describe this piece as amazing. The rhyme and flow are excellent. S P O O K Y !

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Joseph Anderson
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Re: She Walks

Postby Joseph Anderson » Mon Mar 16, 2015 4:00 pm

A mystical and beautiful flowing poem. Very melodic and memorable.Full of intriguing thoughts.Love the smooth cadenced rhyme

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Nightmute
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Re: She Walks

Postby Nightmute » Mon Mar 16, 2015 4:42 pm

A melodic flow and rhyme scheme that emphasizes a heightened haunted feel, Cindy. Poignant, and tinged with sadness...a beautiful write, indeed.

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Tom Balch
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Re: She Walks

Postby Tom Balch » Tue Mar 17, 2015 3:24 pm

A beautifully penned piece leaving the reader wanting for it to go on and on, Cindy. Loved it.


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