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Puddle Dreams
Posted: Sun Mar 15, 2015 11:53 am
by Cindy
The rain came down
It felt like rivers
Puddles with ocean dreams
Quivered with delight
Ahhh, thwarted again
The clouds moved on
Only the trees kept raining
A drizzle too far
Reflections languished
...not one ripple.
Re: Puddle Dreams
Posted: Sun Mar 15, 2015 12:42 pm
by stevenstirk
A delight to read. 'Puddles that want to be oceans'. It's what
originality is all about .
Re: Puddle Dreams
Posted: Sun Mar 15, 2015 10:27 pm
by Fay Slimm
What a wonderful thought - - "Puddles with ocean dreams" - - such a unique conception Cindy - lovely flow to this read.
Re: Puddle Dreams
Posted: Mon Mar 16, 2015 9:15 am
by Karin Anderson
Such creative imagery and 'puddles with ocean dreams quivered with delight really' did it for me'. I will look at puddles with a different viewpoint now Cindy.
Re: Puddle Dreams
Posted: Mon Mar 16, 2015 9:47 am
by Stella
i love the heavy rain when runs like a river along the roads , and puddles can quite magical as they swirl with the flow.. they might well be "oceans of dreams"..
Re: Puddle Dreams
Posted: Tue Mar 17, 2015 3:32 pm
by Tom Balch
A very clever and well thought out piece, Cindy.
Re: Puddle Dreams
Posted: Tue Mar 17, 2015 3:56 pm
by denysruak
Puddle is such a lovely word. I remember as a child I would stand on the edge of puddles and get the feeling of falling into their depths, almost as if I was falling into the ocean so this enchanting write evokes special memories. Hey Puddle! You are an ocean to me! Thanks for this dream, Cindy.
Re: Puddle Dreams
Posted: Fri Mar 20, 2015 11:17 pm
by Nightmute
Such nice imagery, Cindy...and the rain can be so cleansing and bring a beautiful scent to the air, Ma'am.