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SUCCESS.

Posted: Mon Mar 16, 2015 10:09 am
by Fay Slimm
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See the March sun wedging its roundness
through gaps in grey clouds,
shouldering drench away from flowering.

See the fresh buds writhing as half-opened
colour expects more
warmth-impregnation, known to be potent.

See the tree-branches upwardly meshing
as seething with stretch
greenness reshapes with abundant tresses.

See the hedgerows dance without moving,
as wild flower-heads loosen
and nod to Spring's accompanying music.

See the earth flush with myriad pleasures
and enter dimensions where
success is measured by nature's readiness.

Re: SUCCESS.

Posted: Mon Mar 16, 2015 11:22 am
by Karin Anderson
The photo is oh so very beautiful and I can see these delightful spring images in my mind. Your poem is a success indeed as is nature's readiness Fay.

Re: SUCCESS.

Posted: Mon Mar 16, 2015 1:31 pm
by Stella
March is certainly heralding the approach of spring Fay in this delightful write...

Re: SUCCESS.

Posted: Mon Mar 16, 2015 5:05 pm
by Nightmute
Wow, the picture is quite alluring, to be sure, dear Fay, and the grandiose feeling of Spring coming forth to make an appearance is quite appealing and beautifully depicted in this amazing write, my friend.

Re: SUCCESS.

Posted: Tue Mar 17, 2015 3:21 pm
by Tom Balch
Beautiful imagery throughout this springtime gem of a poem, Fay. Loved it.

Re: SUCCESS.

Posted: Thu Mar 19, 2015 11:53 am
by Cindy
Beautiful. I see spring in every stanza.

Re: SUCCESS.

Posted: Fri Mar 20, 2015 2:03 pm
by stevenstirk
I really enjoyed this seasonal piece Fay