Just For Fun :)

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Tom Balch
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Just For Fun :)

Postby Tom Balch » Tue Mar 17, 2015 3:40 pm

I have a little metal tin and I keep it in a draw
it´s filled with memories from the past,
and d´ya know what, to the top it´s nearly full;

I´ve got the ticket from the cinema
where we sat cuddling at the back,
was it really fifty years ago, hard to believe is that;

A receipt from Jones the jewellers for the ring with
mounted stone, the wrist band from the hospital,
God I hate this being alone;

There´s a pebble from a Cornish beach, we picked
it up in sixty seven, a sprig of heather tied with string
from the moors somewhere in Devon;

I´ve still got the card you sent to me when I reached
twenty one, it´s signed with lots of xxx kisses
and you added a smiley face : ) for fun;

My tin it once held biscuits, now only life’s lost
crumbs, that´s all that I have left now and
sifting through its contents only leaves me numb;

These mementos always bring a tear but mostly
bring a smile, as I relive the time we spent
mile after loving mile...

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Stella
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Re: Just For Fun :)

Postby Stella » Tue Mar 17, 2015 3:54 pm

Just beautiful Tom, thank you so much for sharing the special memories you keep in that little tin safe in your drawer...a lovely write :)

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Re: Just For Fun :)

Postby denysruak » Tue Mar 17, 2015 4:03 pm

Treasure those memories, Mr Balch, sir, and keep on writing about cherished times. Thanks for sharing.

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Re: Just For Fun :)

Postby stevenstirk » Wed Mar 18, 2015 9:47 am

This piece is wonderful Tom. A journey through the past with all
of its memories and mixed emotions. Such memories demand
prose, as rhyme couldn't do them justice. Thanks for sharing
your journey.

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Re: Just For Fun :)

Postby Cindy » Thu Mar 19, 2015 11:48 am

This is a wonderful poem. I love the little journey through time. :-)

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Re: Just For Fun :)

Postby Karin Anderson » Fri Mar 20, 2015 11:33 am

A delightful write where your special memories are precious reminders of what is important to you, and very much enjoyed thank you Tom.

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Re: Just For Fun :)

Postby Seema Chowdhury » Sat Mar 28, 2015 12:58 pm

A delightful write


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