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Pleasure …..
Posted: Thu Mar 19, 2015 8:19 pm
by Stella
The water stole away
from the incoming tide
and swirled around the inlet
where I stood that morning
watching dawn break
Sensual soft sand crept up
in between my toes
and my legs tingled
with the whirl of salt
stinging in painful pleasure
Early sun splashed spray
kissed my breasts
and I trembled
with the ecstasy of it
As the circling ripples
reached up and found
my thighs
I allowed myself to lean back
and float in the rhythm,
wishing you were there
to feel it too
©Stella Armour 2012-09-05
Re: Pleasure …..
Posted: Thu Mar 19, 2015 10:21 pm
by Fay Slimm
Such a sensuous feel to this morning sea-dip - - your pen conjures a picture of sheer pleasure for readers. Thank you for sharing these dreamy water-moments with us dear Stella.
Re: Pleasure …..
Posted: Fri Mar 20, 2015 2:01 pm
by stevenstirk
Wow Stella. Such a tingling piece. I never got more than
ankle deep without running like mad from the cold sea.
My mother would say "Nesh you are" !!! . Never really
knew what it was...just that I was it.
Re: Pleasure …..
Posted: Fri Mar 20, 2015 11:11 pm
by Nightmute
The warmth allowed via the pleasure of this experience, Stella, and we would dearly love to share such moments with that special someone that we love, Ma'am. A write that calls up such beautiful sensations, Ma'am.
Re: Pleasure …..
Posted: Mon Mar 23, 2015 12:46 pm
by Karin Anderson
The feeling of skinny dipping is second to none, and you have brought this to the reader with your beautiful voluptuous penning. I have savoured all your sensational imagery and very much admire the photo as well Stella!
Re: Pleasure …..
Posted: Mon Mar 23, 2015 4:33 pm
by Tom Balch
I´m all pleasured up after this sensual gem, Stella.
Re: Pleasure …..
Posted: Tue Mar 24, 2015 1:44 am
by Cindy
Sounds wonderful, I must say. Beautifully written too.