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Dream-catchers
Posted: Sun Mar 22, 2015 11:02 pm
by Stella
Dreams of you
caught in seductive, silken webs,
exquisite in the moonlight;
uncombed ripples on wanderlust tides.
Fragile feathers on see-saw winds
ebb and flow
twixt ecstasy and despair
Caught and cradled visions
of ancient poetic spirits
wistfully woven in mystical hues
of sun, moon and heaven in unison
a total eclipse from all reality
of wakefulness.
Devout dream-catchers keep you
for ever bound in celestial rings
of love, peace and divinity whilst I,
sigh in the sadness of solitude
too much in awe of the sun and moon
afraid of Heaven,
not daring to reach out and knowing
that you are stolen from me.
© Stella Armour 22-03-15
© Stella Armour 22-03-15
Note: I wrote this as i was watching my dreamcatcher swaying in the window of my bedroom..
Re: Dream-catchers
Posted: Mon Mar 23, 2015 4:17 pm
by Joseph Anderson
Stella-I am trying hard to not become a convert to free verse, but you are dimming my efforts with your splendid beauties.I am conceding.You
and Walt Whitman are convincing me.It probably to late for me to try it
Re: Dream-catchers
Posted: Mon Mar 23, 2015 4:31 pm
by Tom Balch
Well I´m certainly pleased I caught this dream of a poem, Stella. Keep working on Joseph.lol
Re: Dream-catchers
Posted: Mon Mar 23, 2015 9:41 pm
by Nightmute
A pensive write with an edge of melancholia due to the separation, Stella. You mix spirituality and reality within the heart's remembrances to effect a beautiful write that sings in sorrowful tones, yet also recalls those times of known joy, as well.
Re: Dream-catchers
Posted: Tue Mar 24, 2015 1:33 am
by Cindy
Isn't it amazing how sadness can become something so beautiful in a poem? And this is definitely beautiful.
Re: Dream-catchers
Posted: Wed Mar 25, 2015 9:18 am
by Karin Anderson
Dream-catches are a fascinating subject to read about and stem from Native American culture and I must read more about them. Your free verse is beautiful and bittersweet enriched with splendid imagery. Also I love the dove and feathers in the picture with the glorious colors in the sky Stella.
Re: Dream-catchers
Posted: Wed Mar 25, 2015 7:23 pm
by stevenstirk
Wonderful, amazing, brilliant. They have all been said but I add
my own congratulations on this little pearl.
Re: Dream-catchers
Posted: Fri Mar 27, 2015 9:40 am
by Simply Bono
Hello my dear friend..I have arrived at last
this poem of yours is my first read on here..
what a beautiful ~ picturesque write
Re: Dream-catchers
Posted: Fri Mar 27, 2015 1:41 pm
by Fay Slimm
A peek into your freestyle while watching that dream-catcher has produced a most beautiful poem dear Stella - - a ton of thanks for this poignantly written collection of wonderful imagery.
Re: Dream-catchers
Posted: Sat Mar 28, 2015 12:53 pm
by Seema Chowdhury
A beautiful and a Pictourious write