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Spring
Posted: Mon Mar 23, 2015 3:02 pm
by Tom Balch
Soft morning sunshine seems much warmer now
as Pastel coloured flowers take their bow,
the Rainy days are scarce and getting few
skies Indigo tones changing grey to blue,
as the New season starts to rearrange
showing Glimpses of a summertime change.
Re: Spring
Posted: Mon Mar 23, 2015 5:25 pm
by Stella
Oh Tom, i have not seen this form done before, a sort of graduated acrostic..it looks and reads wonderfully well.
Much enjoyed.. more please!
Re: Spring
Posted: Mon Mar 23, 2015 5:58 pm
by Nightmute
Clever means of highlighting "Spring", Tom, and a beautiful reminder that the season is now upon us, sir.
Re: Spring
Posted: Tue Mar 24, 2015 1:39 am
by Cindy
This is so cool! Love the way it looks.
Re: Spring
Posted: Wed Mar 25, 2015 9:47 am
by Karin Anderson
You have crafted impeccable rhythm and rhyme and a most enjoyable read. The highlighted letters are the highlight of this beautiful spring write Tom.
Re: Spring
Posted: Wed Mar 25, 2015 7:19 pm
by stevenstirk
I agree with Karin. This is impeccable . You are a true wordsmith Tom.
Re: Spring
Posted: Sat Mar 28, 2015 12:56 pm
by Seema Chowdhury
Very creative