Spring

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Tom Balch
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Spring

Postby Tom Balch » Mon Mar 23, 2015 3:02 pm

Soft morning sunshine seems much warmer now
as Pastel coloured flowers take their bow,
the Rainy days are scarce and getting few
skies Indigo tones changing grey to blue,
as the New season starts to rearrange
showing Glimpses of a summertime change.

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Stella
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Re: Spring

Postby Stella » Mon Mar 23, 2015 5:25 pm

Oh Tom, i have not seen this form done before, a sort of graduated acrostic..it looks and reads wonderfully well.

Much enjoyed.. more please! :D

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Nightmute
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Re: Spring

Postby Nightmute » Mon Mar 23, 2015 5:58 pm

Clever means of highlighting "Spring", Tom, and a beautiful reminder that the season is now upon us, sir.

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Cindy
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Re: Spring

Postby Cindy » Tue Mar 24, 2015 1:39 am

This is so cool! Love the way it looks.

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Karin Anderson
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Re: Spring

Postby Karin Anderson » Wed Mar 25, 2015 9:47 am

You have crafted impeccable rhythm and rhyme and a most enjoyable read. The highlighted letters are the highlight of this beautiful spring write Tom.

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stevenstirk
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Re: Spring

Postby stevenstirk » Wed Mar 25, 2015 7:19 pm

I agree with Karin. This is impeccable . You are a true wordsmith Tom.

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Seema Chowdhury
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Re: Spring

Postby Seema Chowdhury » Sat Mar 28, 2015 12:56 pm

Very creative


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