Free Of Care ( Trimeric Poem )

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Tom Balch
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Free Of Care ( Trimeric Poem )

Postby Tom Balch » Mon Mar 23, 2015 8:33 pm

I can still recall
those summer days
when we were young and
free of care,

those summer days
that seemed to last
forever and a day,

when we were young and
life was fun
we dared to dream,

free of care
is really where
I do so long to be.

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Stella
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Re: Free Of Care ( Trimeric Poem )

Postby Stella » Mon Mar 23, 2015 8:40 pm

Tom, i have to admit that i had to look up this lovely form and i learned something new..thank you

i shall have to add it to our list of formats so that others may enjoy writing in it too.. :D

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Re: Free Of Care ( Trimeric Poem )

Postby Fay Slimm » Mon Mar 23, 2015 10:48 pm

A wonderful sentiment wrapped up in this new form of poetry Tom - - really enjoyed the read.

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Re: Free Of Care ( Trimeric Poem )

Postby Cindy » Tue Mar 24, 2015 1:27 am

That really does sound wonderful.

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Re: Free Of Care ( Trimeric Poem )

Postby stevenstirk » Mon Mar 30, 2015 2:48 pm

Yep. You got it mate! ***Free of care, and hip and knee replacements, and
pretty coloured pills, a bus pass, and a season ticket to the nearest geriatric
hospital. A pint of beer for 3d and the back seats of the cinema for
1 1/2d **** . At least I'm free of 'carers' . Ha Ha

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Re: Free Of Care ( Trimeric Poem )

Postby Karin Anderson » Tue Mar 31, 2015 9:21 am

Another new form from you and I am impressed and enjoy this beautiful poem too thank you Tom.


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