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Free Of Care ( Trimeric Poem )
Posted: Mon Mar 23, 2015 8:33 pm
by Tom Balch
I can still recall
those summer days
when we were young and
free of care,
those summer days
that seemed to last
forever and a day,
when we were young and
life was fun
we dared to dream,
free of care
is really where
I do so long to be.
Re: Free Of Care ( Trimeric Poem )
Posted: Mon Mar 23, 2015 8:40 pm
by Stella
Tom, i have to admit that i had to look up this lovely form and i learned something new..thank you
i shall have to add it to our list of formats so that others may enjoy writing in it too..
Re: Free Of Care ( Trimeric Poem )
Posted: Mon Mar 23, 2015 10:48 pm
by Fay Slimm
A wonderful sentiment wrapped up in this new form of poetry Tom - - really enjoyed the read.
Re: Free Of Care ( Trimeric Poem )
Posted: Tue Mar 24, 2015 1:27 am
by Cindy
That really does sound wonderful.
Re: Free Of Care ( Trimeric Poem )
Posted: Mon Mar 30, 2015 2:48 pm
by stevenstirk
Yep. You got it mate! ***Free of care, and hip and knee replacements, and
pretty coloured pills, a bus pass, and a season ticket to the nearest geriatric
hospital. A pint of beer for 3d and the back seats of the cinema for
1 1/2d **** . At least I'm free of 'carers' . Ha Ha
Re: Free Of Care ( Trimeric Poem )
Posted: Tue Mar 31, 2015 9:21 am
by Karin Anderson
Another new form from you and I am impressed and enjoy this beautiful poem too thank you Tom.