That Day.....

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Fay Slimm
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That Day.....

Postby Fay Slimm » Mon Mar 23, 2015 10:47 pm

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Time, that day went somewhere else,
its race died away for two sweet
hours and duty stopped pressing
while wrist watches lent themselves
to about-face on long needed relief.

Time became missing, movement left,
when love overtook what it perceived
as the date made to be remembered,
when loose hands of clocks gave them
just one afternoon and time receded.

Then came that sad day in December
and uncovered memory bequeathed
its proof that one union of timeless
love could consume grief and forever
place death's cruel sting out of reach.
Last edited by Fay Slimm on Tue Mar 24, 2015 7:39 am, edited 2 times in total.

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Cindy
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Re: That Day.....

Postby Cindy » Tue Mar 24, 2015 1:29 am

This is so very beautiful, Fay.

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Re: That Day.....

Postby Stella » Tue Mar 24, 2015 9:23 am

"That Day" a very sad day when time conceded that emotions needed a space of their own..beautifully written as always Fay...

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Re: That Day.....

Postby Nightmute » Tue Mar 24, 2015 4:51 pm

A stunning write of rare and exquisite beauty, dear Fay. The clever wording and phrasing heightens the joy found and deepens the sorrow, Ma'am. How gorgeous and meaningful a write this is, my friend!


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