Tom will be thrillled when he sees that you have written a gem of a poem in his special form the "Pentaiku" Karin.
You have risen to his challenge with sensitivity and love in your words, beautiful my friend..
Re: Little Messages For My Daughter (Pentaiku poem)
Posted: Wed Apr 01, 2015 2:14 pm
by Cindy
Very nice.
Re: Little Messages For My Daughter (Pentaiku poem)
Posted: Wed Apr 01, 2015 2:33 pm
by Tom Balch
Tom is more than thrilled with this beautiful Pentaiku poem, Karin. You have used the form perfectly in this delightful poem and the subject touches the readers heart. Thank you so very much for. Tom.
Re: Little Messages For My Daughter (Pentaiku poem)
Posted: Thu Apr 02, 2015 10:18 pm
by Joseph Anderson
Karin-A great conversational type of poetry. I have never heard of that word,but then I like it. I believe I could do that,but not like you,Stella or Tom. It was a joy to read. A fine job.
Re: Little Messages For My Daughter (Pentaiku poem)
Posted: Fri Apr 03, 2015 6:15 am
by Fay Slimm
A beautiful usage of both form and encouragement -- this poem bubbles with wise answers to a wondering young mind. Thank you Karin for posting this little message.
Re: Little Messages For My Daughter (Pentaiku poem)
Posted: Sun Nov 06, 2016 11:42 am
by Adette
Love the way you have worded this little piece Karin it really touches the heart - the last stanza brought a tear to the eye so much love within your word - the music added that extra special touch and just had to listen twice so relaxing - heavenly
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