Yielding.

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Fay Slimm
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Yielding.

Postby Fay Slimm » Fri Apr 03, 2015 5:07 am

Image


Hiding under
an uncertain show
of wintery sun
exposed veins on
trees shiver,
twigs curl inwards
for warmth
and air-awareness
vibrates in
protection against
harm to new
plantlets growing
beneath them
when winter gales

Cold sears tips of
tender fissure
and blows frozen
chills between
branching fingers
then gleefully
stalks thru' brown
treelet trunks,
plays so capricious,
uses cunning
to up-turn saplings
but they, tho'
naked try leaning
into the grip
of devilish breezes.

By working around
need for relief
woodland behaves
with dignity
not getting fraught
but counting
each blast as rated
root-testing so
digging deeper for
next onslaught
they patiently trust
that yielding
to fierce unforeseen
blusters wins.

For where
the wind blows,
on whom,
from what direction
and when,
nobody knows.

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Stella
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Re: Yielding.

Postby Stella » Fri Apr 03, 2015 10:01 am

Fay, you have such an insight of nature and here you portray the woodland in winter perfectly trying to protect the new threads of life that it will yield
in spring..

The most wonderful image for me are the inward curled twigs, and on reflection they do just that and i had never thought it was for protection and warmth...thank you so much for this winter canvas.

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Tom Balch
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Re: Yielding.

Postby Tom Balch » Fri Apr 03, 2015 12:22 pm

"Cold sears tips of tender fissure and blows frozen chills between branching fingers" Wonderful imagery , Fay. A poem that I will read over and over again.

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Karin Anderson
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Re: Yielding.

Postby Karin Anderson » Sat Apr 04, 2015 4:56 am

I agree with Tom about reading it over and over again as I already have. The 'exposed veins on trees shiver' really caught my eye, yet there were
many more brilliant images to enjoy Fay.

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Cindy
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Re: Yielding.

Postby Cindy » Mon Apr 06, 2015 12:07 pm

Striking images. Beautiful to read. Love the poem.

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Seema Chowdhury
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Re: Yielding.

Postby Seema Chowdhury » Tue Apr 07, 2015 3:11 pm

Beautiful and expressive, nice photo to compliment your write.


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