NIGHT AWAKENS.

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Fay Slimm
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NIGHT AWAKENS.

Postby Fay Slimm » Fri Apr 03, 2015 5:14 am

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Dark fast erupts with decisive lust,
locks in sky-bound eyesight
between banks of cloud.
and blocks all sight of the sun.

Dusk in-folds twilight's early hold,
attacks any last view
of home-coming bird flight
and wraps shadows in used gold.

Night awakens and strikes daylight,
cuts late evening shine from
sunset's nocturnal edge
and shuts darkness in, tightly.

Love lost between them, what wins
then is coming blackness
but when daylight comes back
sun's smile will melt any held mist.

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Stella
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Re: NIGHT AWAKENS.

Postby Stella » Fri Apr 03, 2015 9:55 am

The sun always gives light and refreshes just like spring does after dark winter days.

My favourite image is of dusk wrapping shadows in used gold... so beautiful Fay...

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Tom Balch
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Re: NIGHT AWAKENS.

Postby Tom Balch » Fri Apr 03, 2015 12:26 pm

The picture and your words blend perfectly to produce this masterpiece, Fay, Beautiful work indeed.

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Karin Anderson
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Re: NIGHT AWAKENS.

Postby Karin Anderson » Sat Apr 04, 2015 4:48 am

The splendor of the picture and your images are stunning and I too melted with your last line thank you Fay.


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