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NIGHT AWAKENS.
Posted: Fri Apr 03, 2015 5:14 am
by Fay Slimm
Dark fast erupts with decisive lust,
locks in sky-bound eyesight
between banks of cloud.
and blocks all sight of the sun.
Dusk in-folds twilight's early hold,
attacks any last view
of home-coming bird flight
and wraps shadows in used gold.
Night awakens and strikes daylight,
cuts late evening shine from
sunset's nocturnal edge
and shuts darkness in, tightly.
Love lost between them, what wins
then is coming blackness
but when daylight comes back
sun's smile will melt any held mist.
Re: NIGHT AWAKENS.
Posted: Fri Apr 03, 2015 9:55 am
by Stella
The sun always gives light and refreshes just like spring does after dark winter days.
My favourite image is of dusk wrapping shadows in used gold... so beautiful Fay...
Re: NIGHT AWAKENS.
Posted: Fri Apr 03, 2015 12:26 pm
by Tom Balch
The picture and your words blend perfectly to produce this masterpiece, Fay, Beautiful work indeed.
Re: NIGHT AWAKENS.
Posted: Sat Apr 04, 2015 4:48 am
by Karin Anderson
The splendor of the picture and your images are stunning and I too melted with your last line thank you Fay.