Betrayal

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Noodlehead1997
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Betrayal

Postby Noodlehead1997 » Sun Apr 05, 2015 8:03 am

I'm driving through the rain
My life is whizzing by
Rain rolling down the window
Tears streaming from my eyes

The sky's been grey throughout the day
My thoughts as dark as night
Images of you with my sister
Made me see the light

Pull yourself together girl!
Don't even answer his text
Muster up your girl power
Dry your eyes and shout next!
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Stella
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Re: Betrayal

Postby Stella » Sun Apr 05, 2015 3:40 pm

It is so good to see you back posting again my friend.. please excuse the state of the site .. at the moment we are changing servers to get a better and faster site..

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Cindy
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Re: Betrayal

Postby Cindy » Mon Apr 06, 2015 12:11 pm

A sad poem. I can imagine the moment.

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Karin Anderson
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Re: Betrayal

Postby Karin Anderson » Mon Apr 06, 2015 12:50 pm

From bitterness to assertiveness and kudos for making the right decision and I love the picture too!

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Seema Chowdhury
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Re: Betrayal

Postby Seema Chowdhury » Tue Apr 07, 2015 3:08 pm

A poignant write, beautifully expressed.


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