Not Crying

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Stella
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Not Crying

Postby Stella » Sun Apr 05, 2015 9:31 pm

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I am not crying
‘tis just the cold wind on my face

My heart is not racing
it missed a beat and is catching up

My lip trembles
only because I cannot find the words

To describe
how very beautiful my feelings are

for You



© Stella Armour 2010-06-29

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Re: Not Crying

Postby Cindy » Mon Apr 06, 2015 12:01 pm

So sweet. :-)

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Re: Not Crying

Postby Karin Anderson » Mon Apr 06, 2015 12:57 pm

Your precious denial is so moving especially with 'my lip trembles'. A tender and most beautiful write Stella.

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Re: Not Crying

Postby Joseph Anderson » Thu Apr 09, 2015 6:03 pm

Stella-This poem is so inclusive.It has an almost universal appeal.It could have been written for anyone,everyone,even me.Please pardon my
vanity.A most appealing gem

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Re: Not Crying

Postby Tom Balch » Fri Apr 10, 2015 10:40 am

Beautiful couplets of love, Stella.

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Re: Not Crying

Postby Nightmute » Tue May 12, 2015 7:52 pm

A gorgeous, heart-felt penning, Stella. Such feelings are worthy of shedding tears over, methinks, Ma'am.


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