For Tom ( a response to his poem)

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Stella
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For Tom ( a response to his poem)

Postby Stella » Tue Apr 07, 2015 10:49 pm

When it was dark that night in the park
two lonely souls met not knowing yet
each was a friend and until life did end
they would share a bed although unwed
he would gently groom she would purr and bloom
then he smiled in delight and late every night
they didn’t just talk they took a walk
in the local park where it was dark
he thought her divine she made his eyes shine
he will never forget the love that he met
the stray cat in the park that night it was dark

©Stella Armour 2015

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Re: For Tom ( a response to his poem)

Postby Karin Anderson » Wed Apr 08, 2015 12:58 am

A beautiful sequel as a response to Tom's poem. This is true love so, I do not disapprove of the sharing a bed although they are unwed. Plus this is what happens in society now. I also love how 'he would gently groom and she would purr and bloom' for the internal rhyme thank you Stella.

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Re: For Tom ( a response to his poem)

Postby Joseph Anderson » Wed Apr 08, 2015 2:06 pm

Stella -A purr fect response for Tom and his love affair.I bet you just threw this together in a moments notice.It was great

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Re: For Tom ( a response to his poem)

Postby Stella » Wed Apr 08, 2015 4:03 pm

I did indeed Joseph.. i couldn't resist..lol

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Re: For Tom ( a response to his poem)

Postby Tom Balch » Wed Apr 08, 2015 7:37 pm

Ha-ha! What a brilliant response to when we met, Stella. Me thinks I feel another could be on it´s way... really enjoyed this cheer up my day poem, thank you.

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Re: For Tom ( a response to his poem)

Postby Stella » Wed Apr 08, 2015 7:41 pm

me too...hahaha


it was lots of fun... :lol:

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Re: For Tom ( a response to his poem)

Postby Cindy » Tue Apr 14, 2015 10:27 am

Adorable. A great response to Tom's poem.


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