The Stubborn Rice Krispie

[stevenstirk]

Wile cleaning the kitchen wif Mummy won day
I saw a Rice Krispie who sed he wud stay

And sure enuff wen Mummy finished the howse
I saw in the corner a likkle wood louse

But then as I bended a likkle to see
It was the Rice Krispie who stared back at me

I shot up the sters and told Mummy I'd seed
The flippin Rice Krispie but she disagreed

She said she'd beed thura and he wassen there
and that I imaginned and she didden cur

An so I reterned to the kitchin wonce more
and theres the Rice Krispie alive on de flore

Eeze skittin and laffin an grinnin a bit
Ee said "I fink mummy finks your a daft git"

But I wazzen avin is cheek enny more
An decided to skwash im rite intoo the flor

So I got daddies ammer an I cudden stop
An I it im until he went Snap Krcackle Pop

[denysruak]

So that's where the "Snap, Crackle, Pop" originated! A lovely, inventive narrative.

[Stella]

Oh wonderful....a great poem to share Steven....i shall never look at a rice krispie again without thinking of you..

[Cindy]

Love this one too. Your poems are always so fun to read.