All Shook Up Instant Attraction Chemistry

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Karin Anderson
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All Shook Up Instant Attraction Chemistry

Postby Karin Anderson » Thu Apr 16, 2015 1:10 pm





The timeless secret of the universe
Is a lover’s long shot gamble at play.
Some sense it is a high and mighty curse
And know it’s a sky rocket price to pay.

This biologic cracked phenomenon
Is crazed instant attraction chemistry.
Mad magnetic pull on women and men
When all to soon ’me’ becomes a brisk ‘we’.

The flashing from lightning's take-over bid
Drive emotions to a climatic high.
As its striking can blast a head's fixed lid
To an exposed risk and primeval cry.

It’s the clinquant seductive explosion
Of a passion fruit eruption in spring.
Aching moan of a brassiere undone,
And the lusting for a rushed diamond ring.

The sunlight piercing volatile lead light
swiftly harlequins the hues of the heart.
As huge waves crash to a thundering height
with Mt. Vesuvius volcano’s start.

It’s all the world’s merry-go-rounds spinning
The sick gut wrenched lover’s body around.
And the vertiginous rider clinging
To finally faint and drop in a mound.

The timeless secret of the universe
Of crazed instant attraction chemistry.
Can surely make us all shook up and yet

True love may take time and reason to be.

Karin Anderson © 2015

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Fay Slimm
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Re: All Shook Up Instant Attraction Chemistry

Postby Fay Slimm » Fri Apr 17, 2015 11:46 am

Am still tapping my feet at one of my favourite numbers and teamed with your wonderful verse I have to say I am completely in love with the duo of poetry and music - - in fact am "all shook up" for today - - ha - - A great piece of rhyming too Karin.

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Re: All Shook Up Instant Attraction Chemistry

Postby Joseph Anderson » Fri Apr 17, 2015 10:39 pm

Karin-Theres a whole lot of shaking going on.Great song, even greater poem.It had my wife and I up and trying to cut a rug.A lively write with a degree
of sensuality.Really enjoyablepoem that I have played and read three times already.You are with it

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Re: All Shook Up Instant Attraction Chemistry

Postby Stella » Sat Apr 18, 2015 8:34 am

I am all shook up this sunny morning too Karin, you really have taken me back to my teenage years when love was instant , all consuming and urgent..lol

i am back "bopping" in my youth as i read this and listen to the video, wonderful times to be had then and i love the clever flow and alliteration ...also too your closing line was perfect.. wonderful..thankyou :D

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Re: All Shook Up Instant Attraction Chemistry

Postby stevenstirk » Sat Apr 18, 2015 9:07 am

Wow Karin.. that was really great !!
Aha Aha.......That's the wonder of you! and I 'Don't have a wooden Heart'.
A brilliant shake up in this clever piece about instant attraction . I only get
that feeling with Barbecued Spare Ribs.

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Re: All Shook Up Instant Attraction Chemistry

Postby Cindy » Sun Apr 19, 2015 10:24 pm

Love every stanza with the clever rhymes and images. Great poem.

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Re: All Shook Up Instant Attraction Chemistry

Postby Tom Balch » Mon Apr 20, 2015 7:01 pm

What a delight this poem is, Karin. Foot tapping stanzas I shall read over again. Loved it.

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Re: All Shook Up Instant Attraction Chemistry

Postby Nightmute » Fri May 08, 2015 11:16 am

The draw we feel with attraction is quite powerful, indeed, Karin, and you certainly put on display the efficacy of that daunting and enjoyable pull...but you rightly state that "True love may take time and reason to be". Love the song and that is quite a hot pair of dancers shaking it up for us, Ma'am.

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Re: All Shook Up Instant Attraction Chemistry

Postby Sandra Martyres » Sat May 09, 2015 9:23 am

Foot tapping it is... Excellent poetry in your own inimitable style Karin


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