Much More.

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Fay Slimm
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Much More.

Postby Fay Slimm » Fri Apr 17, 2015 11:42 am

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From the lips of rock cliffs mixed water falls.

From sound partnered by strength tumbles
down force boiling below.

From the roar of gravity's pull spills trouble
for boulders will follow.

From bonded moments clamour's rumbling
locks rock in air's hollow.

From law of attraction the cataract bundles
earth-crust in its rainbow.

From liquid married to granite spring lungs
infiltrated with stone.

From cliff's lip spills much more than water.

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Stella
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Re: Much More.

Postby Stella » Sat Apr 18, 2015 8:38 am

so much strength in the imagery of this poem Fay , i could feel the heaviness of the tumbling and mixing of two life forces..

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Re: Much More.

Postby stevenstirk » Sat Apr 18, 2015 9:01 am

A fabulous portrayal in words Fay . A perfect poem and picture match.

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Karin Anderson
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Re: Much More.

Postby Karin Anderson » Sat Apr 18, 2015 12:43 pm

Wow! When I clicked on your poem the picture of the waterfall falls down the page and I can almost hear the forceful sounds you so vividly describe.
'cliffs lips' is so creative and I very much admire the assonance in the last line too Fay.

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Seema Chowdhury
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Re: Much More.

Postby Seema Chowdhury » Wed Apr 22, 2015 12:07 am

Nice imagery depicted for your readers.


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