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Much More.
Posted: Fri Apr 17, 2015 11:42 am
by Fay Slimm
From the lips of rock cliffs mixed water falls.
From sound partnered by strength tumbles
down force boiling below.
From the roar of gravity's pull spills trouble
for boulders will follow.
From bonded moments clamour's rumbling
locks rock in air's hollow.
From law of attraction the cataract bundles
earth-crust in its rainbow.
From liquid married to granite spring lungs
infiltrated with stone.
From cliff's lip spills much more than water.
Re: Much More.
Posted: Sat Apr 18, 2015 8:38 am
by Stella
so much strength in the imagery of this poem Fay , i could feel the heaviness of the tumbling and mixing of two life forces..
Re: Much More.
Posted: Sat Apr 18, 2015 9:01 am
by stevenstirk
A fabulous portrayal in words Fay . A perfect poem and picture match.
Re: Much More.
Posted: Sat Apr 18, 2015 12:43 pm
by Karin Anderson
Wow! When I clicked on your poem the picture of the waterfall falls down the page and I can almost hear the forceful sounds you so vividly describe.
'cliffs lips' is so creative and I very much admire the assonance in the last line too Fay.
Re: Much More.
Posted: Wed Apr 22, 2015 12:07 am
by Seema Chowdhury
Nice imagery depicted for your readers.