Sunset Dessert

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Tom Balch
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Sunset Dessert

Postby Tom Balch » Fri Apr 17, 2015 6:22 pm

I thought that the day
could not get any better
but when I started
tucking into
the chilled Lychees
and vanilla ice cream
sat on the terrace
watching a golden
sunset... well,

it just got better.

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Stella
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Re: Sunset Dessert

Postby Stella » Sat Apr 18, 2015 8:45 am

Your "getting better" made me remember chilled lychees and how refreshing they are,
maybe all i need is a beautiful golden sunset too Tom...lovely :D

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stevenstirk
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Re: Sunset Dessert

Postby stevenstirk » Sat Apr 18, 2015 8:57 am

I have suddenly become insanely jealous. I can visualise your
lovely puddin. What was the first course. Ha Ha

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Cindy
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Re: Sunset Dessert

Postby Cindy » Sun Apr 19, 2015 2:32 am

Sounds good. The poem and the desert. :-)

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Fay Slimm
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Re: Sunset Dessert

Postby Fay Slimm » Sun Apr 19, 2015 1:25 pm

Oooh my sighs get louder the more I think of lychees and ice-cream under that golden sunset - - - - - must have another helping of this treat Tom - - great read.

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Karin Anderson
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Re: Sunset Dessert

Postby Karin Anderson » Tue Apr 21, 2015 1:10 am

This sounds like heaven on earth and I can imagine it all, with the taste buds oozing with lychees and vanilla bathed in golden light A most gorgeous flavorsome write Tom!

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Seema Chowdhury
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Re: Sunset Dessert

Postby Seema Chowdhury » Tue Apr 21, 2015 11:55 pm

Sounds like a beautiful moment, hope you enjoyed.


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