Love’s Thread

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Stella
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Love’s Thread

Postby Stella » Fri Apr 17, 2015 8:23 pm

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How fragile the precious wisp of love
between us,
that binds, embraces, compels
lingering still.

The unseen thread that holds fast
in defiance
when likely seams are frayed away
and split wide.

Hidden deep in old forgotten bouquets
of love tokens,
a new soft kiss petal not yet unfurled,
clings sleepily;

but hush leave her be in innocence
to slumber,
for if she finds warmth within us
she may bloom.

In her resplendent sensual beauty
we would rise,
ecstatic emotions would flower within us
once again;

thus in leaving her to quiet, sweet repose
she cannot wilt,
she will forever hold our secret.
keeping love alive



©Stella Armour 2011-06-02

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Re: Love’s Thread

Postby stevenstirk » Sat Apr 18, 2015 9:09 am

Ah....A Rose by any other same. Loved the sentiment.

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Re: Love’s Thread

Postby Karin Anderson » Sat Apr 18, 2015 12:32 pm

A delicate, intricate and beautiful love poem rich imagery that only you can write Stella. I love how you personify the petal and weave it through the latter stanzas is it becomes magical for me.

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Re: Love’s Thread

Postby Joseph Anderson » Sat Apr 18, 2015 5:54 pm

The thread or tie that binds.Ethereal in it's beauty.Delicacy and intimacy abounds.A thing of beauty is a joy forever,to quote another poet of
fame.Your weaving of words is astounding

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Re: Love’s Thread

Postby Cindy » Sun Apr 19, 2015 2:28 am

Very beautiful. I love the words "kiss petal". Again, beautiful.

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Re: Love’s Thread

Postby Seema Chowdhury » Wed Apr 22, 2015 12:03 am

The unseen thread hold so fast...... Lovely


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