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Treading Gently.

Posted: Thu Apr 23, 2015 2:18 pm
by Fay Slimm
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A mysterious place is a garden.

Communing with past golden echoes
its fairy-world beckons
in every plant that knowingly
hears presence as it's memory grows.

Fragrance cradled in walls' bygone ages
calls to put present away
while walks among trees express
deeper the spell of phantom possession.

Voices in pools will elusively chatter
in trickles of previous laughter
if we, after hearing will duly listen
with ears that recognize mere whispers.

Secrets arising from long-lost love
grip the spirit with coveted
moans to stir distinctive attention
when such ghostly-gardens are entered.

Sentiments ooze from ground-mist
once used for clandestine trysts,
gone-ones know treading gently eases
grief left and respects a garden of dreams.

Re: Treading Gently.

Posted: Fri Apr 24, 2015 1:19 am
by Seema Chowdhury
Garden of dreams.... Beautiful

Re: Treading Gently.

Posted: Fri Apr 24, 2015 9:08 am
by Stella
Yes, they say that you are nearer to God in the garden than anywhere else on earth and i think this is true Fay..

Re: Treading Gently.

Posted: Fri Apr 24, 2015 9:54 pm
by Karin Anderson
An amazing garden of dreams with outstanding imagery, and you bring its mystery to light so wonderfully Fay.

Re: Treading Gently.

Posted: Wed Apr 29, 2015 8:49 pm
by Cindy
Very beautiful. You put into words what I feel when in a garden or even a forest.

Re: Treading Gently.

Posted: Fri May 01, 2015 10:27 pm
by Nightmute
A tranquil landscape and feel you give unto us in this endearing and magnificent write, Fay. Such a reverent tone, and the majestic feeling of such a place that overcomes one when we enter those beauteous gardens.