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Laid Bare
Posted: Fri Apr 24, 2015 10:03 am
by Stella
When the flower blooms
hidden in the mist
like your love for him
not yet ever kissed,
it’s all a fantasy,
all a delusion
until
the mist disappears
and there you are
in your nakedness,
still un-kissed
but flowering
with no veil to hide
and he sees you bare,
and the mist was never
really there.
(Think i have been reading to many of Cohen's poems..lol)
© Stella Armour 2015
Re: Laid Bare
Posted: Fri Apr 24, 2015 8:04 pm
by Tom Balch
A beautifully penned and very sensual poem, Stella. Love the closing lines.
Re: Laid Bare
Posted: Fri Apr 24, 2015 10:23 pm
by Karin Anderson
A sultry fantasy that brilliantly exposes a lover who hides, and you have inspired me to read Leonard Cohan's poems too thank you Stella!
Re: Laid Bare
Posted: Wed Apr 29, 2015 8:46 pm
by Cindy
I love it. I too will have to read some of Cohen's poems.
Re: Laid Bare
Posted: Fri May 01, 2015 10:29 pm
by Nightmute
A sensual air given voice in this awesome write, Stella. When bared, our souls can shine so beautifully, Ma'am.
Re: Laid Bare
Posted: Fri May 08, 2015 3:39 pm
by Joseph Anderson
The sensuality engendered in this poem is on an ethereally, divine plain and certainly inoffensive to anyone.A delight
Re: Laid Bare
Posted: Sun May 10, 2015 2:19 am
by Seema Chowdhury
An expressive write, nicely composed.
Re: Laid Bare
Posted: Sun May 10, 2015 1:02 pm
by stevenstirk
Wow ! Stella . This is such a lovely and succinct little poem.
A lovely romantic piece.