Healing

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Stella
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Healing

Postby Stella » Sat May 02, 2015 11:29 pm

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In
silent
solitude
she catches
sad reflections
to heal with tears
then gently lets them
slip away through kindly
hands that calm and caress
with the embrace of forgiveness
the moon sees her in silent solitude
and quietly reflects her beautiful smile.


© Stella Armour 2015

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Karin Anderson
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Re: Healing

Postby Karin Anderson » Sun May 03, 2015 12:43 pm

Your gracious words are certainly healing ones and are perfect with the 'picture with the beautiful moon featured Stella. I particularly like 'hands that calm and caress with the embrace of forgiveness' as they really speak to me.

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Re: Healing

Postby Cindy » Sun May 03, 2015 3:39 pm

What an appealing form. I love the last two lines.

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Re: Healing

Postby Seema Chowdhury » Tue May 05, 2015 12:53 am

A beautiful write

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Re: Healing

Postby Nightmute » Tue May 05, 2015 12:11 pm

Taking the time for reflection, and then allowing for peace to be known and forgiveness to be realized is fantastically shown in this softly gentle and beautiful write, Stella. So many refuse to find that quietude, which enables such stunning wisdom and tranquility to be known. A fantastic and sagacious write, Ma'am.

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Re: Healing

Postby Nishu » Tue May 05, 2015 2:31 pm

Such a gentle and beautiful pen Stella. Lovely to be reading your quality work..back after a long long gap..and this is beautiful and soothing.

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Re: Healing

Postby stevenstirk » Tue May 05, 2015 3:59 pm

A beautiful and calming poem in a pyramid structure.
Much enjoyed.


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