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Healing
Posted: Sat May 02, 2015 11:29 pm
by Stella
In
silent
solitude
she catches
sad reflections
to heal with tears
then gently lets them
slip away through kindly
hands that calm and caress
with the embrace of forgiveness
the moon sees her in silent solitude
and quietly reflects her beautiful smile.
© Stella Armour 2015
Re: Healing
Posted: Sun May 03, 2015 12:43 pm
by Karin Anderson
Your gracious words are certainly healing ones and are perfect with the 'picture with the beautiful moon featured Stella. I particularly like 'hands that calm and caress with the embrace of forgiveness' as they really speak to me.
Re: Healing
Posted: Sun May 03, 2015 3:39 pm
by Cindy
What an appealing form. I love the last two lines.
Re: Healing
Posted: Tue May 05, 2015 12:53 am
by Seema Chowdhury
A beautiful write
Re: Healing
Posted: Tue May 05, 2015 12:11 pm
by Nightmute
Taking the time for reflection, and then allowing for peace to be known and forgiveness to be realized is fantastically shown in this softly gentle and beautiful write, Stella. So many refuse to find that quietude, which enables such stunning wisdom and tranquility to be known. A fantastic and sagacious write, Ma'am.
Re: Healing
Posted: Tue May 05, 2015 2:31 pm
by Nishu
Such a gentle and beautiful pen Stella. Lovely to be reading your quality work..back after a long long gap..and this is beautiful and soothing.
Re: Healing
Posted: Tue May 05, 2015 3:59 pm
by stevenstirk
A beautiful and calming poem in a pyramid structure.
Much enjoyed.