The Tiny-ites

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stevenstirk
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The Tiny-ites

Postby stevenstirk » Sun May 03, 2015 6:29 pm

The Titchites and the Smallites
Had both launched an attack
The Titchites hit the Smallites
And the Smallites hit them back

And then just when the Smallites
Began to get on top
The Teenyites attacked them
And they simply wouldn't stop

The Teenyites were winning
But the Littleites advanced
And smited all the Teenyites
Who didn't stand a chance

You'd think that all the Littleites
Would peacefully reside
But they were charged by Tinyites
And everybody died

The battle happened very quick
Inside my old toy chest
And all the 'ites' were buried
Well !... At least I tried my best

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Cindy
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Re: The Tiny-ites

Postby Cindy » Mon May 04, 2015 10:15 pm

I love this. Kind of a tongue twister.

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Seema Chowdhury
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Re: The Tiny-ites

Postby Seema Chowdhury » Tue May 05, 2015 12:46 am

A fun read

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Karin Anderson
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Re: The Tiny-ites

Postby Karin Anderson » Tue May 05, 2015 7:00 am

Methinks this might be a satire and a very witty one at that, as your word play on the 'ites' is phenomenal Steven. A ite supports a belief such as a certain idea and all the other ites join in and everybody dies in the war of ideas. Perhaps there were soldiers in your old tea chest, but whatever this is about it is most entertaining and has exercised my smile muscles today thank you Steven.

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Nightmute
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Re: The Tiny-ites

Postby Nightmute » Tue May 05, 2015 12:16 pm

Love the flow and action you pronounce in this great write, Steven. A captivating and entertaining write, to be sure, sir.

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Stella
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Re: The Tiny-ites

Postby Stella » Tue May 05, 2015 4:31 pm

I now have ite-itus, i am walking round making "ite" words..lol

Loved it!

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Joseph Anderson
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Re: The Tiny-ites

Postby Joseph Anderson » Thu May 07, 2015 7:57 pm

Perhap s Karin is right and you send us adeeper meaning, but Iam wondering. Anyhow, a frolicing fun read , great with rhyme a d cadence

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Seema Chowdhury
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Re: The Tiny-ites

Postby Seema Chowdhury » Sun May 10, 2015 2:23 am

Very creative and unique

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ken.brandli
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Re: The Tiny-ites

Postby ken.brandli » Mon May 18, 2015 10:01 am

A Stirk special. Too many 'ites' in this world. Perhaps they should all get back in their box! LOL


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