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DANCE

Posted: Wed May 06, 2015 2:11 pm
by Nishu
Dance
And prance 
Happiness 
Sashay like waves 
A breeze like Zephyr 
Pirouette like sunbeams 
Spin on toes ballerina  
Swaying to the beat of the heart 
Moonwalk at night with silver moonbeams 
Move into the day with rhythm of  life 
Arms wide to receive light like a dervish 
With music of the spirit and spheres
And love in a summer salsa 
The touch of autumn's tango 
Whirling like a snowflake
A waltz in green spring 
Rain melodies 
In the soul 
Enchant
Dance 


“Dance, when you're broken open. Dance, if you've torn the bandage off. Dance in the middle of the fighting. Dance in your blood. Dance when you're perfectly free.”

"I am a drunkard from another kind of tavern. I dance to a silent tune. I am the symphony of stars"

Rumi

Re: DANCE

Posted: Wed May 06, 2015 6:19 pm
by Cindy
This is very beautiful. I like the form you used. It looks nice.

Re: DANCE

Posted: Wed May 06, 2015 8:52 pm
by Stella
I admire the words of Rumi very much and this lovely double etheree poem enhances the theme of "Dance" beautifully Nishu...

thank you for sharing :D

Re: DANCE

Posted: Thu May 07, 2015 7:33 am
by Nightmute
A determination to not be weighted down by a world gone insane comes through quite clearly in this fantastic write, Nishu. To allow oneself to flit about and move with a joyous step is surely good for the soul, Ma'am. Indeed, let us dance, no matter the season, and with or without any reason, says I, my friend.

Re: DANCE

Posted: Thu May 07, 2015 7:03 pm
by Joseph Anderson
Nishu-so happy to see back It must be very difficult to turn out such beauty in this ever ascending,descending pattern.You did it and splendidly

Re: DANCE

Posted: Fri May 08, 2015 5:07 am
by Karin Anderson
A truly wonderful double etheree as I love to dance and have just returned from folk dancing. You have brought it alive with creative beautiful creative motion and my favorite line is "With music of the spirit and spheres". Also thank you for sharing Nishu.

Re: DANCE

Posted: Sun May 10, 2015 2:21 am
by Seema Chowdhury
A nice and a creative write.

Re: DANCE

Posted: Sun May 10, 2015 12:57 pm
by stevenstirk
Delightful poem on dance, with a clever form.