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You're The One I Want

Posted: Thu May 14, 2015 2:33 am
by Simply Bono
You're The One I Want

She looked upon his handsome face
pulse tingling at the nearest of him
the sight of his warm brown eyes
made her entire body glow within.

She felt glorious when he kissed her
recalling the hot sweetest of his lips
savoring the hardness of his hands
as they tightly close around her hips.

She craved all he had wild and raw
desire of pure savage rose within her
her heart raging in resounding passion
as waves of exquisite joy began to stir.

He gathered her tightly in his arms
she felt as though encased in flames
placing his hungry mouth on hers
her sweet torment his kiss does tame.

"You're the one I want", he said
as his touch burnt deep into her skin
placing his moist,scalding lips to hers
once more molding her body to him.


2012 © Bonnee Sue Opp

Re: You're The One I Want

Posted: Thu May 14, 2015 8:46 am
by Stella
Passion at its height here Sue, a really hot write my friend

It is good to see you posting again :D

Re: You're The One I Want

Posted: Fri May 22, 2015 2:52 pm
by Nightmute
A definite WOW of a write, Bono. The attraction, romance, and magnetic pull felt is given a sultry voice in this hot and well-written verse, Ma'am.

Re: You're The One I Want

Posted: Sat May 23, 2015 6:10 pm
by stevenstirk
Wow...That was hot stuff indeed. A very well written piece.

Re: You're The One I Want

Posted: Sat May 23, 2015 9:17 pm
by Fay Slimm
OOoooh steamy and passionate - - a stirring read indeed Bono.

Re: You're The One I Want

Posted: Fri May 29, 2015 4:10 pm
by Seema Chowdhury
Beautiful write