Cancer (haiku)

[ken.brandli]

and in the stillness
of a chill autumn twilight
a descending darkness



© K R Brandli 05/17/2015

[Stella]

A very emotional haiku Ken, i hope these words are not from experience my friend..

[Karin Anderson]

A very moving haiku as the stark images you have crafted make me shiver, knowing the topic is 'Cancer'. On a positive note, the treatment for cancer is improving for those who suffer. It is great to see you on the site again Ken.

[Nightmute]

You evoke a somberness that settles over the heart of the reader with this chilling haiku, sir. Certainly, that mood well depicts the harrowing subject matter. Well written, most assuredly.

[Cindy]

This is a very good haiku. The mood of the haiku truly fits the title.

[stevenstirk]

Hi Ken . I'm so sorry to hear about this mate. Keep writing. It
is good for the state of mind. Take care and TFS.