Until When.

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Fay Slimm
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Until When.

Postby Fay Slimm » Sun May 24, 2015 9:23 pm

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You and I, long ago, unfastened the bodice
of stiff convention, trod
down high fences of weathered traditions
as we galloped bare-back

on imagined kisses.

We stole a march on time's unfelt attack,
found nectar through holes
in establishment's barriers, flung sadness
aside and laughingly sipped

the boundless sweetness.

We feasted needs on what was forbidden,
exposed as false fate's
gloomy predictions severed restrictions
and willingly boarded this

ship to love's destiny.

Fused into one you and I uncaged ageless
contentment that given
free rein seized and bent under-used aids
for pleasure and no death

shall our union end.

Repletion once gained produces a peace
and somewhere resting
is the passion we stirred as in repeated
vows to breast separation

patiently until when

we
meet
again.

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Stella
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Re: Until When.

Postby Stella » Tue May 26, 2015 11:16 am

Beautiful as always Fay, free and unbound love portrayed wonderfully and yes there is no death..it lives on. :D :D

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Nightmute
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Re: Until When.

Postby Nightmute » Wed May 27, 2015 6:38 pm

The feel you produce through this heady and gorgeous write leaves one with a sigh upon their trembling lips, Fay. Through courtship, and then onward, the relationship deepens and grows to such a degree that even death has no say in the matter, Ma'am. 'Tis a most glorious telling of true love, indeed.

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Seema Chowdhury
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Re: Until When.

Postby Seema Chowdhury » Fri May 29, 2015 4:01 pm

The boundless sweetness.... Lovely expression


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