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Shadow on the Wall

Posted: Fri Jun 05, 2015 11:07 pm
by SyberRose
She hears music playing; her shadow on the wall
waiting to be asked to the shadow ball
It has been so long since an arm around her waist
dancing cheek to cheek as fingers interlace
She lights a jasmine candle and places it by her side
Waiting for another shadow while she dances teary eyed
The flame begins to dance within the naked night
enticing each other as they tango and incite
Spinning and twirling around the candlelit room
sweet fragrance seduces as love begins to bloom
Wick of night disappears in the midnight hour
One shadow dancing; a lonely wallflower
Always to be a solo ballerina.
never to tango to a concertina


© 2015 SyberRose

Re: Shadow on the Wall

Posted: Sat Jun 06, 2015 9:24 am
by Stella
You always write of romance in your own unique and beautiful style Rose, and this is no exception.

Welcome to our site Rose, we hope you will enjoy it here finding new friends and old..... :) :) :)

Re: Shadow on the Wall

Posted: Sat Jun 06, 2015 11:56 pm
by SyberRose
Thank you Stella and a112year old man.....Glad you both enjoyed...appreciate your visits...Rose

Re: Shadow on the Wall

Posted: Mon Jun 08, 2015 7:23 pm
by Nightmute
A beautiful sadness envelops the reader whilst waltzing with the wistful imagery you provide, SR. You convey the loneliness and longing to dance with a partner so well, Ma'am.

Re: Shadow on the Wall

Posted: Mon Jun 08, 2015 11:32 pm
by SyberRose
thank you Nightmute...and for peeking in today...appreciate your comments...Rose

Re: Shadow on the Wall

Posted: Sat Jun 13, 2015 1:03 pm
by Seema Chowdhury
Very nicely expressed, a sweet bitter write of emotions flowing deeply.

Re: Shadow on the Wall

Posted: Sun Jun 14, 2015 12:18 am
by Cindy
I love this. It's very beautiful.

Re: Shadow on the Wall

Posted: Mon Jun 15, 2015 9:40 am
by Tom Balch
A beautiful, albeit a sad piece well penned.

Re: Shadow on the Wall

Posted: Tue Jun 16, 2015 12:36 am
by SyberRose
Thank you very much Seema, Cindy and Tom for peeking in ...appreciate your visit...Rose

Re: Shadow on the Wall

Posted: Tue Jun 16, 2015 7:06 pm
by stevenstirk
Welcome SyberRose. This is a lovely piece of poetry. Your
imagery is a delight, and the balance of the lines is great.
The reader can experience the loneliness . Well Done.

Re: Shadow on the Wall

Posted: Thu Jun 18, 2015 9:38 pm
by SyberRose
Thank you Steven...I appreciate your nice comments and glad you enjoyed...Rose