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Almost Unseen.
Posted: Sat Jun 06, 2015 8:05 am
by Fay Slimm
The picture above is of seal-bay
near where I walk Tessa daily.
The waves in today's bay ripple
almost unseen,
like moving shadows or milky
ruffles of cream,
gliding like snakes under duvets
of billowing green
patching its face in smoky grey
an unwary sea
reacts to surge of the tidal sway
by drowning all breeze
but before calm blows it away
wind plays with mischief
by birthing miniscule wavelets
where play schools of seals.
Re: Almost Unseen.
Posted: Sat Jun 06, 2015 9:16 am
by Stella
How lovely Fay that you live in such a wonderful place where the beauty of nature is in abundance.
Tessa must love her walks along the coastline and in the countryside.
A beautiful write and i just loved the imagery of the waves gliding like snakes under duvets...
Re: Almost Unseen.
Posted: Mon Jun 15, 2015 5:32 pm
by Joseph Anderson
Such a beautiful poem.Such a precious picture Your poetry dealing with nature,seashores,skies,forests or whatever are remarkably memorable.This is
just a shining example
Re: Almost Unseen.
Posted: Mon Jun 15, 2015 7:47 pm
by Tom Balch
How wonderful for both you and Tessa to walk along such a beautiful coastline. A lovely poem , Fay.
Re: Almost Unseen.
Posted: Tue Jun 16, 2015 7:13 pm
by stevenstirk
Wonderful....simply wonderful. 'like moving shadows or milky
ruffles of cream' is my favourite line. Just one thing though
Faye...Does Vernon Kay know that you're out with her ??
xx
Re: Almost Unseen.
Posted: Thu Jun 18, 2015 10:00 pm
by SyberRose
Its so nice to read you again Fay...its been awhile...Loved the poem and the lovely photo...nicely done as always...Rose:)
Re: Almost Unseen.
Posted: Fri Jun 19, 2015 7:37 pm
by Cindy
A very beautiful picture a and poem. I like how soothing the poem feels.
Re: Almost Unseen.
Posted: Sun Jun 21, 2015 11:14 am
by Seema Chowdhury
Nice imagery depicted for your readers . Thanks for sharing Fay.
Re: Almost Unseen.
Posted: Sun Jun 21, 2015 12:14 pm
by Sandra Martyres
What a beautiful poem Fay .. You conjure up for us lovely images of the sea and the region where you live ..
Re: Almost Unseen.
Posted: Wed Jun 24, 2015 9:35 pm
by Nightmute
Beautiful descriptiveness to truly capture the feel as the sea meets the shore, Fay. Awesome picture, as well. An idyllic and scenic spot perfect for walking with Tessa and enjoying the beauty provided by the Lord, Ma'am.