2015 - A Dose Of Reality

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Seema Chowdhury
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2015 - A Dose Of Reality

Postby Seema Chowdhury » Sat Jun 13, 2015 12:54 pm

Pull yourself out of the quick sand of despair
Separate the paths between fantasy and reality
Clear the fog and mist from life's constant cycle
And draw the lines over imaginary and unreality

Speak to your soul in rhythms that moves you
Write out your emotions in bright colors to cope
Reach the shining bright sun on the bright sky
And build life with blocks of courage and hope

Remember the stars are always within reach
If you don't quit and try to pass road blocks
You will find solace for your troubled heart
And it will not let life's shattered reality mock

If you don't know where to start afresh
Carefully open the gate of opportunity today
Keep moving even through bitter trials
So you can eventually find good life's way

Just get back up firmly when you fall down
Have sometime by yourself to get quickly ready
Separate the paths between fantasy and reality
And find grip on life that is strong and steady

Seema Chowdhury
June 12, 2015

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Fay Slimm
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Re: 2015 - A Dose Of Reality

Postby Fay Slimm » Sat Jun 13, 2015 6:15 pm

A fine verse of wise advice Seema - - if only we could carry these steps into our troublesome lives how much happier would we be... a read to remember and so well crafted.

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Re: 2015 - A Dose Of Reality

Postby Cindy » Sun Jun 14, 2015 12:32 am

Great advice. Lovely poem.

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Re: 2015 - A Dose Of Reality

Postby Stella » Sun Jun 14, 2015 11:03 am

Thank you Seema for your words of strength... this line touched me most of all,

"Speak to your soul in rhythms that moves you"

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Re: 2015 - A Dose Of Reality

Postby Tom Balch » Mon Jun 15, 2015 9:36 am

A great creed for a good life, Seema.

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Re: 2015 - A Dose Of Reality

Postby SyberRose » Tue Jun 16, 2015 12:40 am

Nicely done...enjoyed your wise words Seema...Rose
“You must stay drunk on writing so reality cannot destroy you.”
― Ray Bradbury,

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Re: 2015 - A Dose Of Reality

Postby stevenstirk » Tue Jun 16, 2015 7:02 pm

A poem full of wisdom and hope. I think this is
such an uplifting piece.Motivation can often be difficult,
but your words are so inspiring.


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