A Soft Whisper

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SyberRose
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A Soft Whisper

Postby SyberRose » Sat Jun 27, 2015 12:18 am

A caress of a soft whisper

Gently rustling in the leaves

An alluring feather drifting,

The nest of night it weaves.


Upon wings of a sparrow

Petals of dawn unfold,

A brilliant budded flower,

Abloom with secrets untold.


Sunflower seeds scatter

Upon a barefoot meadow

They tango in the breeze,

Chimes in the wind echo.


A caress of a soft whisper

The sunlight in our hair,

And sweet scent of prairie grass

The love of nature we share.



© 2015 SyberRose
“You must stay drunk on writing so reality cannot destroy you.”
― Ray Bradbury,

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Tom Balch
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Re: A Soft Whisper

Postby Tom Balch » Sat Jun 27, 2015 9:41 am

A beautiful piece indeed, SR. Very much enjoyed.

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Re: A Soft Whisper

Postby Stella » Sat Jun 27, 2015 10:19 am

A soft whisper indeed Rose,

very gentle and soothing with lovely imagery, and also i liked the repeat of the opening line, it helps to reinforce the softness of the whisper.. :) :)

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Sandra Martyres
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Re: A Soft Whisper

Postby Sandra Martyres » Sat Jun 27, 2015 12:56 pm

A beautiful poem - a pleasure to read

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Re: A Soft Whisper

Postby SyberRose » Sun Jun 28, 2015 1:46 pm

Thank you everyone for taking time to read...Rose:)
“You must stay drunk on writing so reality cannot destroy you.”
― Ray Bradbury,

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Karin Anderson
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Re: A Soft Whisper

Postby Karin Anderson » Tue Jun 30, 2015 12:29 pm

Such beautiful imagery with a delightful delicacy that is such a pleasure to read thank you SR...

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Re: A Soft Whisper

Postby Nightmute » Tue Jun 30, 2015 8:01 pm

This magnificent write conveys such a soft touch, SR. An elegant write that draws the reader in with a contented sigh.

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Re: A Soft Whisper

Postby stevenstirk » Thu Jul 09, 2015 9:58 am

A truly delightful piece with wonderful imagery Rose.

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Re: A Soft Whisper

Postby Joseph Anderson » Mon Aug 31, 2015 7:30 pm

A sweet ,delicate,gentle and stirring poem with a beautiful lilting fragrance.A most pleasuarable read


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