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A Soft Whisper

Posted: Sat Jun 27, 2015 12:18 am
by SyberRose
A caress of a soft whisper

Gently rustling in the leaves

An alluring feather drifting,

The nest of night it weaves.


Upon wings of a sparrow

Petals of dawn unfold,

A brilliant budded flower,

Abloom with secrets untold.


Sunflower seeds scatter

Upon a barefoot meadow

They tango in the breeze,

Chimes in the wind echo.


A caress of a soft whisper

The sunlight in our hair,

And sweet scent of prairie grass

The love of nature we share.



© 2015 SyberRose

Re: A Soft Whisper

Posted: Sat Jun 27, 2015 9:41 am
by Tom Balch
A beautiful piece indeed, SR. Very much enjoyed.

Re: A Soft Whisper

Posted: Sat Jun 27, 2015 10:19 am
by Stella
A soft whisper indeed Rose,

very gentle and soothing with lovely imagery, and also i liked the repeat of the opening line, it helps to reinforce the softness of the whisper.. :) :)

Re: A Soft Whisper

Posted: Sat Jun 27, 2015 12:56 pm
by Sandra Martyres
A beautiful poem - a pleasure to read

Re: A Soft Whisper

Posted: Sun Jun 28, 2015 1:46 pm
by SyberRose
Thank you everyone for taking time to read...Rose:)

Re: A Soft Whisper

Posted: Tue Jun 30, 2015 12:29 pm
by Karin Anderson
Such beautiful imagery with a delightful delicacy that is such a pleasure to read thank you SR...

Re: A Soft Whisper

Posted: Tue Jun 30, 2015 8:01 pm
by Nightmute
This magnificent write conveys such a soft touch, SR. An elegant write that draws the reader in with a contented sigh.

Re: A Soft Whisper

Posted: Thu Jul 09, 2015 9:58 am
by stevenstirk
A truly delightful piece with wonderful imagery Rose.

Re: A Soft Whisper

Posted: Mon Aug 31, 2015 7:30 pm
by Joseph Anderson
A sweet ,delicate,gentle and stirring poem with a beautiful lilting fragrance.A most pleasuarable read